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This was an incredibly poignant little story! I really enjoyed getting to know more and more about both Hal and Lin—they're honestly so cute (but also sad and tragic and make me want to cry??). I love the little snippet we get of their dynamic in the flashback scene, and it made me want to know more about how their relationship developed before what happened? AND ALSO WANT TO KNOW MORE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED IN GENERAL? BECAUSE???

The whole soft and sad vibe of this was really lovely and it did a lot to add to the whole feeling of just... subdued hopelessness and sadness that Hal is feeling about life. I feel like the art style and color palette work really well together to set the tone. And I LOVE the animation of the snow in the title screen! It sets it up right from the beginning to just have this kinda... weighted vibe to it, that only grows as we learn more about Hal's thoughts and what she's going through.

Will be really looking forward to seeing how this story progresses! Especially as right now I can't see how the happy ending will come?? LOL so now I'm quite curious just what will end up happening. A really lovely job overall!! ๐Ÿ’•

yโ€™know when u read a comment and it makes u melt into a thousand tiny sobs? thats me with this comment right now. forever and always beyond grateful for ur support carrot, it truly means the absolute WORLD to me. ๐ŸŒŽ๐Ÿซถ 

what can i say, nothing speaks to me more than tragic gays and an equally as tragic and gay little story. i know ur familiar with the type… heheh. but im glad u feel so curious as to hal and lins dynamic and their present as well! im beyond excited to get to continue to unfurl the pair of them and how they connect with the full release. ive sat on their story for a while until finally making it into loose tooth so im quite eager to share whats been brewing. ( and if hal could be any phrase, subdued hopelessness is honestly the best choice. ) and i promise the weight lifts as the story progresses, and there WILL be a happier ending than im sure u can imagine rn! maybe happy isnt the uh right word, but its certainly not hopeless. ๐Ÿ‘

AH this comment has meant more to me than ull ever ever know! i will be framing it in my mind forever, this is all the motivation i needed to pick production back up with a spark. sending u a big digital high five for always being such a cheerleader, and forever waiting eagerly for more work from ur glorious mind too! :- ) ๐Ÿ’•